In love with this piece! Ah, so great. Every word, every line is PERFECT. :)

Ohh syrup........YOU SMACKED IT!!

As hannah said every word and line is just spot on :-))))

Spit it and post it all the way, the old school way is the best way ...always has been .......always will be just like YOU!

Epic write as always :-)

5/5

I really like the first stanza of the poem:

I'm an old soul writer
with a backyard pen,
I learned that rhyme
should flow in rhythmic song
and haiku's are flowers
from ancient Japan.

It sets the atmosphere for the whole write, lovely!

Very nice piece. Nothing wrong with being old school.

Wiping tears away with napkins,
mixing words of scribbled feelings,
leaving them behind at a restaurant,
so the waitress might be touched
by my lonely sorrow.

This stanza really made the poem for me. It visualizes the loneliness sometimes felt.

5/5

I am from the old school myself
there is nothing greater than that
Look at the music, we are going back
30 and 40 years, it is still playing
coming from the old school has so
much inside and meaning, unlike today
awesome poem, so well penned

I can definitely see you in this piece, this beautiful poem shows such elegance and class. Just like you.

I love it!!!

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Oh WOW Andrea, This is really good...

The flow was flawless and the imagery and scent was warm and strong

loved It

This is amazing, am surely nominating this piece.

I really like this poem, I'm old fashion, in a way, I guess I'm in between.

I specially love the ending. One word at a time. . .