Heart-breaking.

Very emotional piece, you have definitely put your heart and soul in this.
but they tell me,
those in walk the hospital halls
Should 'in' be 'that' or 'who'
There is not much I can say about this piece, sometimes those poems that you write from the heart
Especially in such difficult circumstances are those that should be left untouched.
Of course, I knew
that you'd be ready,
deep down, I knew,
that you would not
accept any treatment.

I like how this stanza almost offers the reader a crumb of comfort, before you lead into the inevitable.
Great read.

" I promise I'll live on to say
that love, love has always been
everlasting."

-- T_T

The title " Everlasting" got my attention, I was passing by to read some of your other poems and I stumbled upon this treasure. My goodness, I just felt the love and sadness yet hope in this write. thanks for sharing it, I won't forget the above words.

This piece is very emotional...