Ending a circle

by Ole Carsten   Jun 11, 2012


Gently is the dripping rain,
Days of gray is ending.
Warmer air the sun is sending,
Clothes are washed for any stain.

My mind is relieved now,
Now it is time to make an ending.
It is high time to mark a new beginning,
The biggest change for is like melting snow.

The water contains much power,
Like love it flushes al bad aside.
Taking control for me is my pride,
Water is dripping in me under the hot shower.

Love is filling my veins with steam,
Praying to the universe for aid,
Even a distance can't stop my maid.
Soon we can go on together with our dream.

thanks to Thomas for good advise...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi L
    Thanks a lot

    br
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I like this piece, I can see love in it but I can also see the nature aspect as well.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nice piece with good imagery but a few grammatical errors I don't know if this was to make the poem more fluent or just an oversight

    My mind is relief now (relieved)
    Now it is time make an ending. (to make)
    The water contain much power (contains)

    Other than that a good piece

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