Comments : Checker board

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nice imagery used here.
    Life sometimes seems like a game and we are just mere pawns.
    But don't let this discourage you ;)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    I think this is great! I think making an artful poem out of seemingly mundane as chess is masterful.

    Black and white swirls.
    in the midnight i twirl.

    I love this and the rhyming through-out is buttery smooth. nicely done!