Wow Menna, this is really exceptional.

Very well penned!

This reads as a story of an event that happened in the past but was buried under a blanket of words.
This event did happen though so it won't just go away.
History always comes out, you just don't know when.

well written piece

5/5

I agree... an exceptional write! I love your way with words Meena... and how you write. Your poems just draw the reader in, as does this one :)

Well written! :D

When I saw it was an acrostic poem, I almost skipped on past.... But this is amazing!
Usually, acrostic poems lack depth and originality, but this achieved both perfectly.

I will not be so quick to judge a style I usually dont like next time.

A beautiful write. 5/5

This is sadly beautifully. It radiates the feelings of uncertainty and fates obligations. We all at times get muddled in emotional turmoil with lifes' unexpectancy. We feel incapable of confronting the demons in us. A further relapse to dwell in misery and despair. One needs to in all ramifications of life, thrive through emotional pangs of unfortunate circumstances. To effortlessly go with the flow and clear off prejudice.

Perseverance, diligence, relentless faith and an ambivalent spirit to persue even under detrimental causes. Such can sweep off ones cloud of misfortune, miseries and despondency. Life can never be in ones favour but one can see to its fruition with patience and determination.

I love the images it creates, your metaphors are absolutely brilliant and tangible. I'm really impressed with this piece, take care.
Cheerio! ;) ..

This is just amazing.... I wish I could have written this... So sorrowful and excellent
Good work:)

Nice Work Meena!!!

Sometimes the greatest enemy to inner peace is just ourself. The right person to trust, who doesn't judge, who understands and listens. Who is just a ear to absorb the pain can relieve the burden. What a wonderful write you penned, written so well because your understand this pain and you always penn with emotion. You know also this pain can be released, the day will come when time decides its enough, and the door opens for it to leave. "Bravo"