Diamond In Denial

by Thomas   Jun 11, 2012


Why do you lie?
Lie to me, to yourself,
lie to the world.
Why my little elf?

Everyone can see
the truth in front of them.
That you are
no less than a true gem.

A diamond no less,
that shines so bright.
A diamond, for which
I would put up a fight.

Defending it,
oh so fiercely.
But would hold it
so lovingly.

Be honest and look into my eye
and tell me you're not a girl
that would make me want to die
and lock myself away like a pearl.

If you don't see it in my eye
then you're truly blind.
But just know that,
you're truly one of a kind.

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  • Love the comparison - works perfectly.
    A splendid write.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Love the comparison of the girl to a diamond... lovely write. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Diamonds are like a jewel that always keep shining whichever way you turn and see it and it never looses its face. Likewise to describe a woman with this quality, she must be a rare gem!
    I like the comparison here and as I read it I could imagine a jeweler holding this diamond with such care and love...nice write :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    That is so adorable<3 I can feel the emotion I like how you are comparing a girl to a diamond:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    There is an old saying
    the blind man can tell
    well done Thomas