Comments : 16 and Scared.

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    This reads like pregnancy scare 101.
    I hope this is meant in a fictional sense and not literal because teen pregnancy is no laughing matter.

    Well written though

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The tought of being pregnant can be scary
    but once you know the positive result
    it will change your life for ever

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What I love about this piece is that you have completely opened up and let us in. You are sharing something with us that sounds like you need to share with someone. Going through something like this alone can be quite difficult, especially for a 16 year old.

    Awesome piece but I hope everything is OK.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    It's a scary thought of being pregnant at 16, wondering if the father will actually be there, how you will support it, will you have to drop out of high school... thousands of questions run through your head. but i know many teens who have had a baby who have done it, and have became wonderful parents. it will change your life for the better, you won't be worrying about just yourself anymore, you will have that little one to worry about more. I hope everything turns out for the best for you, dear... glad you shared your worries/feelings with us, it's a lot better than keeping them bottled inside.

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Great poem with a real life situation at it's core.
    Nice write Kitty!