Papaw's Lucky Pair

by Hannah Lizette   Jun 11, 2012


Time has blown like the wind,
but my memory of you is as crisp as a freshly picked tomato from your garden.

Oh, Papaw...
seems like yesterday
you were teaching me how to bait a hook,
how to garden,
drying my tears when I scraped by knee from falling off my bike,
and teasing me about my first boyfriend.

I still have the cigar box you gave me after all these years,
it's almost falling apart, overflowing with memories of you.
Dozens of pictures, fishing hooks and float bobbers,
old scratch off lottery tickets we got every Saturday,
and your lucky pair of gardening gloves.

I remember you telling me stories of how your gloves were magical,
if you didn't wear them your garden would never flourish.
Giggling at your silliness, knowing you were telling a fib.

Only as I grew up, I began to ponder if it was really true,
I dragged out those old worn out gloves,
and as I worked, I felt your presence,
it was like your hands were molding into mine,
making my every move for me.

"Only time will tell Papaw," I said as I dusted the dirt off my blue jeans
and put the gloves in my back pocket as I sipped a glass of cold, tart lemonade.

As the weeks flew by,
I began to get disheartened,
only to hear you remind me,
"Patience, baby girl."

As I awoke one hot summer morning,
I casually looked outside, expecting to see no progress.
Gasping, I ran outside to see my elegant, long-stemmed lilies,
just as smooth as silk, petals like fluffy clouds.

Tears start to cascade down my cheek as I hold your pair of gloves,
I wish you were here to say, "I told you so."

Your stories are no longer stories, they are true to the very word,
I will use these gloves as I garden,
I promise to doctor them as they begin to show signs of wear and tear.

I will share your legacy with my grandkids,
and let the gloves do most of the talking.

*rough draft, needs a lot of editing; written for a club challenge.

Copyright 2012: Hannah K.

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    For a rough draft this one was pretty good,
    I read this one when it was posted on the club and I loved it.

    I felt the words really sincere and the image of your dad with the gloves in the garden felt real to me. I did find it nostalgic but I loved the way you used papaw.. it sounds refreshing to me.
    I also felt like you cherish those gloves because of the memories that brings about your dad but also because with those words you learnt so many lessons.

    Amazing write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I really did enjoy the read and the magical words that flowed through. I felt a smile on my face as you were talking about beautiful memories but my heart was sad because of the tone. I am sorry that you lost this person that was obviously close to you.

    Awesome write

    x

  • Oh this is adorable!
    Its great to see a poem about the happy memories of loved ones past away instead of the sadness their death has brought.
    Loved the sub-story of the gardening gloves. Just one simple memory that means so much to you.

    Thanks for sharing. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a sweet and cute poem
    the way you desribed him
    he was a special and wonderful person
    teeling your children all about their
    grandfather
    very touching poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Awww...this is such a cute poem, Hannah. It almost made me cry :( I take it that Papaw is either your father, or your grandfather?

    I love memories - especially of loved ones. They are always there in case you need to remember who you are.

    Your Papaw sounded like a great man. From what I understand from this poem, he is now dead :( I am sorry for your loss, but he will always be there in your heart and in your memories :)

    Excellent
    5/5

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