Oh Steven this left me in a trance.. I love dark poetry that travels you into the dark of night.. Its detailed and descriptive word display makes this piece a delight to read!! Love it!!

This a really strong poem, and I completely agree this poem made me swin in my imaginations while reading it.
I enjoyed reading it, great job:)

Beautiful imagery! It kind of reminds me of Snow White when she entered the dark forest! While reading this I felt like I was there, very spooky and I love it! :) 5/5

Sounds like Halloween! Reading this brings to my
memory of all the fairy tales...I was lost inside
this read...nice work!