A Poem Forever

by Maple Tree   Jun 12, 2012


I coiled my soul in the depths of madness,
walked upon sharpened blades of glass.

I bathe in sunlight as your forever
molds my aching breath.

You have created a poem within me,
with your timeless and majestic personality.

I'm held tightly in your palm like a tiny seed,
growing within your heart, bathing in a rhapsody.

Pure, sweet love has devoured my eyes and this
soul has written a poem that will linger on forever....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Julia Harrison

    This is actually amazing (:

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    When I read the poem , I thought about your husband, this is a sweet poem. Let love live forever on thine lives and hearts.

  • It seems you are so content with your partner that the certainty of forever cannot/ will not be questioned. That is a beautiful thing in itself.

    Nice poem. 5/5

    Also,
    Love the title.. Very fitting for this poem. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such warmth love does bring and within us it
    sings like a song. A heart warming, loving and passionate write..really enjoyed this read :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    This is a very sweet poem :) I can feel the love coming off of it in waves as I read it, and that is usually hard to do for me :) However, I do have a problem with one stanza. It may just be me, but the second stanza does not quite make sense to me when I read it. I don't know if it is because of the way I am reading it...it might be. The rest is perfect though.

    "I coiled my soul in the depths of madness,
    walked upon sharpened blades of glass."

    ^ When I read this, it sounds like you are talking about before you met the person whom the poem is about. It almost seems like you were in pain - alone, frightened and you probably didn't want to be that way :)

    You then meet the person and your whole world changes :) It is a really beautiful poem. I hope that you have read this to him already, or maybe read it to him someday because he deserves to know how you feel :D

    Excellent
    5/5