by Maple Tree Jun 12, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I coiled my soul in the depths of madness, |
This is actually amazing (: |
by L
When I read the poem , I thought about your husband, this is a sweet poem. Let love live forever on thine lives and hearts. |
It seems you are so content with your partner that the certainty of forever cannot/ will not be questioned. That is a beautiful thing in itself. |
by Meena Krish
Such warmth love does bring and within us it |
by Purple Rose
This is a very sweet poem :) I can feel the love coming off of it in waves as I read it, and that is usually hard to do for me :) However, I do have a problem with one stanza. It may just be me, but the second stanza does not quite make sense to me when I read it. I don't know if it is because of the way I am reading it...it might be. The rest is perfect though. |