Comments : The Room

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This was a nice way of describing the room,
    I would like three windows on my room, but just during the day lol.. during the night, I just want to sleep and the light might not let me.

    I like the simplicity of this poem, and the way it led towards the light. It created a good scene in my mind. When I think about the light of the moon, I first think of the ocean, I'm not sure why. But the room that I was seeing while I was reading your poem was one near the ocean with the three windows, one in the left, right, and down from the room to see the fishes...

    Ohh, can I add one window on the ceiling, to see the stars. Well written.