by Hannah Lizette Jun 12, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
As the wine made love with her taste-buds, |
by Omar
Great poem, nicely written. |
by Mohan
Excelent poem... |
Again simple but powerful the ideas the words flow everything is perfect |
So many things done and said on the spur of a moment and under the influence of alcohol. |
I agree with Thomas.. It could read as though seen through the eyes of a drunk/alcoholic but you have written it as through the eyes of a passionate ex or something spending one more night together, another memory that will be in the past come daylight tomorrow. |