This reads as the story of a drunk but passionate night full of desire.
But like most of those nights it passed and barely left a memory.

Good poem

5/5

I see a lot passion, sharing and speding one
night together

Stunning piece Hanna.

I agree with Thomas.. It could read as though seen through the eyes of a drunk/alcoholic but you have written it as through the eyes of a passionate ex or something spending one more night together, another memory that will be in the past come daylight tomorrow.

Fantastic 5/5

So many things done and said on the spur of a moment and under the influence of alcohol.

Nicely written.

Again simple but powerful the ideas the words flow everything is perfect

amazing

Excelent poem...

Great poem, nicely written.