Awwwwww, I am so sorry Liz :'(
The breaking down of time just shows how hard it is to forget. Its when we count the days that the pain still hangs their inside of us, but once we stop counting it marks the beginning of forgetfulness road. But it hurts, and it shows in your words the amount of pain you feel ..

You may not be able to completely
forget, but in time pain becomes manageable
I am so sorry

No words can describe ... but this was as close it will ever get heartbreaking ... poetry wise flawless ...

I have bawled my eyes out ready this, Liz. I know the pain all too well... this really hits home for me. :(

A beautiful, heartfelt, sad poem. 5/5

I thought I would let people know that this is not a poem about me having a miscarriage, it's about me not being able to have children, and the thing that has been missing for 103 days is my cycle.

Thanks for your heartfelt comments, they mean a lot to me.

x

Liz, your poem tore my insides. Beautiful and sad. Time never heals any thing. We accommodate to things but we never forget.

Don't give up, not yet
there are so many people
who believed they could not have children
and years later when the least expected
a miracle arrived

Oh god, liz. Heartbreaking! Man. why the hell would god deprive someone so good like u of children? That's just unfair, please be strong!

This actually made me tear up.. I am so sorry. I knoe that doesn't help at all but I am anyways... I hope to hell you get the chance to prove th world wrong and that you do have child <3 so beautifuly sad :'(

This is so very very sad.
At first I thought you were talkkng about a lost relationship but then you mention the baby and it just becomes even more heartbreaking.
I cant say I know how you feel, only those in the same situation could... But my heart be with you all the same because I know it would be devastating.

A beautiful write.

Oh Liz, I am so sorry :( I cannot exactly place myself in your situation, so I don't exactly know what you feel like here, but I can always imagine. I can imagine what it would feel like to never hold your own baby in your arms, or not to feel it kicking in your womb as it develops :( so sad :( Are you sure that is what you are going through? If you are...I will cry for you because I can sense how much you wanted a baby of your own.

5/5

Omg Im sorry:( I feel like crying
I dont even know what to say...
Wish you the best Liz<3

Hearbreaking.... poem... awesome... very sad. it relates to reality...

On a writing side of things i thought it was a partner or family member you were speaking of and then i got it,the flow is just epic, its perfect,

On a personal note....ive never read something until now that made tears stream as i read it, my heart goes out to you genuinly it does x

103 days,
2472 hours,
18,320 minutes and
8,899,200 seconds
have passed since I
have felt your presence,
but who's counting?
This is so sad.. Nobody else could count but u do...

Damn Liz.....this made my throat swell up and tears rise in my eyes, and a poem hasnt moved me like that in a long time...

This as so sad but so good how you narrowed it down to the seconds and said whose counting anyways? Which in that one line proves you are, and proves the pain you feel as time passes by....I thought this was a great write, so sad, yet so moving! :)

WOW, did I not comment? This is beautifully sad...very heartbreaking...

I loved this piece in it's way of making me feel the pain and your emotions but it breaks my heart for you, because I know you love children and this must be very hard on you...but don't give up...never give up

love you hun...

hugs
xxx

This broke my heart.... Heart breaking write..love you <3

This is so heartbreaking and sad to read.

It really leaves the reader with a lump in the throat.

I'm sorry Liz,
I first thought that this was about a miscarriage, but after I read your comment I know it's not. But still this piece is so sad.