Quite interesting

His mind in a state
of chaotic intellectual
rebellion, bordering
meltdown.
^^
Now dont ask me why, but this verse made perfect sense to me .. I just got the whole sense of this poem just by this verse alone :O

And did I mention that the title is just PERFECT!!

One suggestion if I may, I think verse 4 and verse 7 would read better if you replaced the fullstop at the end with a question mark.

Really inspiring piece to me :)

This write sounds like a person who is undergoing
a writer's block and can't seem to have the right
words..I like the images each verse contains! Another good read :)