Comments : Down Through The Ages (Alphabet Poem).

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Woooooooooow this poem is amazing, I love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Flowers soft, surround me in the
    Garden of Eden that I wait for thee.
    However long I shall need to wait,
    I gladly shall do so until my
    Juliet appears in front of me with
    Kisses that linger like nectar.....

    WOW, WOW, WOW..this stanza is brilliant, so sweet and beautiful. No wonder this piece has been nominated. i would suggest you not capitalize all first letters since some are just continuing sentences.

    • 12 years ago

      by Steven Beesley

      Thank you Paul for your advice, since this is an Alphabet Poem the purpose of capitalizing the first letter of each sentence is required to highlight the letter.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I do love alphabet poems.... You made this poem flow so elegantly... just a gorgeous piece by you!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Steven you have done a very good job with this
    alphabet poem! You made it flow and at the same
    time made the emotions felt as well...well done!!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Aww.. this one was a really well written alphabetical poem, it was lovely and the words just flew along each other.

    I like what you did with the letter Z -- Zizz...

    when I read an alphabetical poem, I first think about what the author will use for the letters, X and Z. And this one surprised me, well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This poem flows like magic considering the form its written with. It doesnt seem forced at all, and it holds packs of emotions with every new verse.

    I honestly enjoyed reading it so much :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh such love in this poem is beautiful.

    I read it a couple of times because I think I rused it the first time because I kept thinking "I wonder what he's going to write for the letter Z" and it was awesome.

    Loved this poem, the images and flow was beautiful.

    Awesome

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