by Justin Jun 14, 2012
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Ya need to listen to the words here that I'm saying, |
So, i totally just rapped that haha. christian rap? very nice. i love the message!! and the title fits very well... it most definitely is the truth! i love the ending too with MLK quote...unique. overall, really loved it! i know this is a sucky comment, im on my phone lol i will come back soon and edit! |
by BlueJay
Though I am not a religious person in this sense, I think that the actual point of the poem and the message is expressed well. I think that the word choice was nice, because it showed your voice well and made the poem relateable and realistic to the majority of the audience that has and will read this. I enjoyed the fact you really seemed to consider your audience, yet you made a point. I also like the fact that it wasn't all that long but it was saying a lot. |
by Justin
Thank you very much! |
by Darren
Hi, good concept, I always like poems that read as the spoken rather than the written word. |