Excellent poem 5/5 :)

Typos: I believe that the second to last line is kind of messed up. I don't know what happened, but it doesn't quite make sense to me...but it is your poem, just trying to help :]

Very good poem. It sounds like you are talking about a drug of some sort...meth maybe? You described whatever it was in such a way that made it sound like meth to me...

Very strong poem. I can tell that you have a strong aversion to it.

Excellent
5/5