by Purple Rose
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Typos: in the third stanza, first line, "glipses" I believe is supposed to be "glimpses." Also, I believe the last line of the second stanza would sound better as "Only Logic has gotten me this far" instead of "Only Logic has got me this far." However, it is your poem and I am just trying to help :) |
by L
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"Peering into my mind, is a fools errand my friend |
by DeviousCharmer
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Thats how I feel. just living cuz i have to . great poem |
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Peering into my mind, is a fools errand my friend |
by Amreen
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Wonderful!! Your flow is good and the message came across. |
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Wow, I really loved the depths of this poem that is put into your soul and the readers, beautiful work, so well flowed and expressed |
by Jenni Marie
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Oh. Holy crap. |
by Ben Pickard
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Really well written and I can relate to this! |