Wow, this is amazing
from what I understand, there is no such
thing as being perfect, so many questions
being unanswered. The truth may be hiding
behind a secret door
I could be wrong

Now I like that, you really mastered the form down to a T. Everything is so smooth in the flow and the poem is not at all forced, extremely well done.

Also the subject is a good one, there are so many doors in our lives, some awaiting to be opened and some which we must find lost keys to open.

Wow, Meme I'm in awe! I really enjoyed reading this poem! First, this structure looks really difficult! So hats off for you for writing this poem with such lovely meaning! I love you structured this poem, it looks like a key! Did you do that on purpose? I love it!!!

I love this poem... I'm still "wowing" in my head!!

=D

Cool! Your form looks like a UFO.

Excellent buildup using appropriate pauses at the ends of lines. Separate "maybe" into two words: "may be." It becomes proper syntax & does not lose the format.

I love challenging writing.. and your poems makes me inspire to write more and more.. keep it up..

Awesome job with this form hun. You are doing so well with them, I love reading them!

Awesome write, I love poems that turn out to be a pic of some kind. I will try to do that myself though I am sure I won't be as good lol

x

Great effort, until you attempt to write one, you do not fully appreciate how difficult these can be, because you have to make every word count as they are limited.
You have managed this very well.
After reading this I think I will have another crack at them.

regards

Darren