Yup, that IS what I needed to feel inspired and wanting to write darkness. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU.

Awesome,

So many great lines in this,

I like

or at the barrenness of a lost horizon-

It makes you try and think what this could look like,

ever since you first danced upon my name.

interesting that you chose "name"
Shouldn't be possible to dance on a name in literal terms but this works on so many levels. The fact that Requiem is a mass for the rest of loss souls argues this.

if you would have billowed away in clarity,

Couldn't imagine anything beeing billowed had clarity yet these opposing each other seems to work perfectly here.

thanks for the read.

regards

Darren

I just read again and again your lines...
This is a great poem!
I liked it!