Interesting subject for a poem with a nice flow to it.

5/5

I agree with Thomas, this is a interesting subject for a poem. To tell you the truth, I can't really tell if you are comparing the similarities of the two, or contrasting them. When I read this, it sounds like the captains are also being judged with the criminals. I guess it just depends on the way you read it...

Interesting poem :)

Excellent
5/5

Great poem, very unique.
sometimes the captains are just as crooked as the criminals.

5/5