Comments : Release Me [Acrostic]

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love Acrrostics I really do:)
    And this one is really great, awesome job Hassan:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Really good poem my friend :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    I just love it the words are nice and true great work well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very nicely woven Acrostic...:)
    A mature write and it speaks out a message(:

    Rolling back the old days
    Each and everything came into
    Love longings, splendid memories
    Exactly touching softly my heartbeats

    ^^
    I loved this part.. full of reminiscence of gone times....:)

    Wonderful!! 5/5^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    One will miss out its an acrostic while reading because of its smooth flow. This is like a motivational note that breezes into one every now and then. Simply enriching and spontaneous to the senses. It gives that peaceful assurance that all shall be well. Written wisely with a string of hope surrounding it. Lovely i must say. :-) ..

    • 12 years ago

      by Boy

      Thanks dear. :)