by Yrem Crish
Very emotional and I can feel what the writer's trying to describe the persona's feeling here. I love the simplicity in this piece and the direct to the point. I enjoyed reading your poem. keep writing more. |
by Jess
Thanks crishmer |
by Tara Kay
Okay, |
by Jess
Thank you very much,I will do with your advice |
by Omar
Very deep poem. I'm sorry about you grandpa. :( |
by Jess
Thanks omar,your comment gave me the inspiration for writing more |
by Marvellous
We die all day long, to live on. Nothing has come to stay, but truth. Take heart and carry on, with peace. |
by Jess
Yeah,you are right but what hurts me and let me can't forget that I live in his home |
by sham pulok
Nice poem... i like the feelings of it |
by Jess
Thank you sham pulok |