Nice imagery, good poem, however....

Everything rhymes apart from the last stanza, was this intentional?

Should line 2 read "we were both" rather than "we both were"

Finally, some commas, then no commas, more full stop than needed.

That aside, I enjoyed the read.

thanks

Thank you

Fantastic, really enjoyed the rhyming and the last stanza was so sweet. 5/5

mandy :)