My Girl

by Paul Gondwe   Jun 16, 2012


She calms me down
with just her touch,
so gentle, it soothes
my soul

She warms my heart
with her bright smile,
so pretty, makes me
feel whole

She is my Buddha,
my Jah, everything
I believe in plus more,
she's my girl

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  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Beautiful. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Savannah

    Very lovely. its a great poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I think this poem is beautiful and it is evident how you feel about this girl. It can be felt within every stanza.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This stanza was amazing so smooth and so believable

    "She calms me down
    with just her touch,
    so gentle, it soothes
    my soul"

    That's my favorite part, on the other two stanzas there were a few parts that tripped me off when I read them.

    For instance by the creator himself-- the sound of it. I feel it doesn't go with the tone of the first stanza.

    Nonetheless, I like this poem very much.

  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    5/5 i wish sm1 would say da sm for me :P

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