by dollwithafrown Jun 17, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
We eat cherries together, |
by Maple Tree
This poem is such a peaceful delight- Its creativity has left me speechless. |
by Colm
Really nice poem that kind-of reminded me of in the film Forest Gump when young Forest and Jenny were like 'peas and carrots' playing by the tree. It portrays innocence and playfulness well, but isn't shallow in that regard: there is a sense of something deeper, a desire to remain this way. There are sad undertones too as you are aware that you probably can't remain this way forever, and the hug is an attempt in a way to store the moment as a memory for the future when times will not be so good or simple. You aren't just describing a set of images but painting a nostalgic type picture that readers can relate to. 'You smell of adventure and dirt,' - One of my favourite lines. Well done |
by Paul Gondwe
Very unique and original. This piece is wonderful, well written. |
This is so refreshing to read and I like the diction choosen. It is certainly different in style from other poetry I have read and is very original in content. |
by Saerelune
You never fail to portray simplicity, whether it's qua content, diction or tone. I could surely imagine two childhood friends doing this. |