Hi Owlin,

What a fantastic dedication and heartfelt write.

Typo:

You let me be myself, finding out my owm mistakes...

^m needs to be changed back to n.

Other then that it was spectacular!

Beautifully expressed poem.
Simply elegant.
Loved it all the way.

all the best and take care

Truly a lovely and heartfelt poem. Bought a tear to my eye especially the last line..

'And as long as life gives us breath, I will, until the end.'

This line hit me like a 'ton of bricks.'
A truly great piece of writing.

A sweet and lovely dedication to your father!
Fathers do a great deal for his children and it takes us kids some time to see it. A nice father's day poem that holds love, respect and admiration..beautifully penned!