Comments : Dreaming of her beauty

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmm... no idea what to say. This is... good. Definitely. And it has a sad yet sweet tone to it. Flows good as well.
    I like how you use "hauntingly" especially when talking about the dream. It paints it out to be a nightmare but you don't want to wake from it. Interesting twist.