Comments : My grave

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Good effort Sana

    just a few typos which you expect from somebody writing in another language which I couldn't do.

    "I'm died proudly because I'm brave"

    should be either "I've died or I'm dead"

    like the emotion in this.

    regards

    • 12 years ago

      by sana

      Thanks for your comment