This is a really cute poem. Extremely cute. As I was reading this I couldn't help going "Awwwww..." to myself :)

The only thing that I would change about this poem is putting it into stanzas. It would make it easier to read, I think - the flow would be smoother.

I hope the baby gets to read this someday :)
Excellent
5/5

Awwww-that's all i can say. Its beautiful.

Awwww-that's all i can say. Its beautiful.