by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA Jun 18, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The biggest revelations bring pain |
by TSI25
Its a very simple message over all, and maybe its just me but i almsot feel as though its too wordy for the message youre going for. otherwise its straight forward and it flows smoothly enough. definitely relatable to anyone who has had their heart broken, and that makes this piece particularly approachable. id say good job |