Imagining..?

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Jun 18, 2012


I see it happening
I hear it happening
Is it just me,
or am I imagining?

He hurts her, she cries
She annoys him, he yells
Is it the end,
of their nineteen years?

All they do is fight
All day and all night
Sometimes it's trivial,
but can it ever be right?

I know that she loves him
I think that he loves her
But they've grown apart,
can the saviour be a heart?

I see it happening
I hear it happening
Is it just me,
or am I just imagining?

By A.Sherden
03 June 2011

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    It's so very sad when two people who were in love grow apart and in most cases eventually live apart. Sigh!

    I seen it happen so many times, in my own family, amongst my friends. I hope that in your case that your parents have mended and it's holding up.

    This was very cleverly written from a third person point of view showing the reader what was going on thoughout the write.

    Well done!

  • Yes about my parents marriage. Its still rocky and unsure but holding together for now.

    My bad. Will fix that up now. Thanks. lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I think this is about a marriage that is failing, that might end in a divorce if they don't try to mend it.
    Great write; only thing I see is in the title it says "Inagining...?" I think it should be "Imagining...?" Not sure, just thought I'd bring it up, lol.