This is so fantastic, it really tells the story of how our world is today... catastrophe is everywhere and it's a shame. peace and happiness are rare nowadays. great job! |
It is so sad to watch how people function |
by Purple Rose
Wow, this is a very good poem. There is only one thing that I would change - last stanza second line 'band' should be 'ban' if you intended to mean to prevent catastrophes from happening. |
Thanks for pointing out that typo - will fix immediately! |
by Mohan
Great poem with emotions.. |