Comments : Chaotic Winds

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You want to get angry
    but is not who you are
    you can't fix the situation
    you want to cry but there are no more
    tears left
    you are feeling numb, all emotions have
    slowly faded away
    you can't deal with all this drama
    and you just want to end it

    life can be very overwhelming at times
    all the emotional pain we have to endure
    that feeling of not being strong enough
    more then we can bare
    the body becomes numb and feelingless

    excellent written

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Very nice write, just one point "Kaotic" should be "Chaotic", maybe a typo?

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Thanxs :)