Comments : I don't care

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Once again, capitalize the 'i's and the first letter of the lines. This piece has good content and a well composed message. wonderful

  • 12 years ago

    by Omar

    This is a great poem. Loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    Everyone seems to care but most of people nowadays are afraid to show that they care probably because of what might others can tell about them, that's how I see people nowadays.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hadassah grey

    Very honest. Yeah dear,i hate pity too:)