Lost In You...

by Dreamofolwin   Jun 18, 2012


No matter how hard I try, its just so hard to do..
to spend my life this way, knowing I can't have you.
You tell me of your love, I felt it from the start...
You made me laugh and smile, mended this battered heart.

But time it holds me captive, to the things of time and sense.
Responsibilites and cares, sometimes seem just so immense.
How I wish to soar to you, feel your heartbeat next to mine...
My soul is lost in you, and will be for all time.

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    D poem is short ,bt has al emotions needed to hold reader's hrt..
    And then d end is too beautiful..

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now this is such a heart felt love poem which pours out everything..the truth! The flow of this read was so smooth and each rhyme just went hand in hand!

    How I wish to soar to you, feel your heartbeat next to mine...
    My soul is lost in you, and will be for all time.

    ^The ending is what I love the most! It ends so perfectly and lovingly...a lovely write Olwin!!

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Nice ryhming worded poem Olwin.
    I really enjoyed reading this!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Wow, what really stood out for me in this piece is the ryhme scheme and the simplicity of its words. I also liked the message, well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This feeling will never go away. I believe that you deserve to experience that love firsthand and should think of your happiness for a change. Be like an eagle and soar to the love. Well done.

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