"My soul is lost in you, and will be for all time."

This is such a soulfully written lament of a love you cannot have or be with, yet your heart tells you not to let go. The reader is spellbound by the majesty of the words written in this poem.

Absolutely stunning!

This feeling will never go away. I believe that you deserve to experience that love firsthand and should think of your happiness for a change. Be like an eagle and soar to the love. Well done.

Wow, what really stood out for me in this piece is the ryhme scheme and the simplicity of its words. I also liked the message, well written.

Nice ryhming worded poem Olwin.
I really enjoyed reading this!

Now this is such a heart felt love poem which pours out everything..the truth! The flow of this read was so smooth and each rhyme just went hand in hand!

How I wish to soar to you, feel your heartbeat next to mine...
My soul is lost in you, and will be for all time.

^The ending is what I love the most! It ends so perfectly and lovingly...a lovely write Olwin!!

D poem is short ,bt has al emotions needed to hold reader's hrt..
And then d end is too beautiful..