by Mnisi Lehlogonolo Jun 18, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I still miss you... |
by Nikita
That is a very powerful poem and the words touched my heart! very meaningful and many are able to identify with its truthfulness |
by Purple Rose
Typos: third stanza, third line 'faiding' is supposed to be 'fading.' Just thought that I would let you know :] Also, I noticed that you only capitalized the 'I' at the beginning of the poem. Thought you might want to change that...just thought it was worth mentioning. |
Hey thanks a lot for mentioning my mistakes, it's just that i was in a hurry when typing this poem. I wanted someone to see it before a certain time, the poem was written by me and my brother so it' what we both experienced. |