I still miss you

by Mnisi Lehlogonolo   Jun 18, 2012


I still miss you...
But not like i did before.
The intense aching i felt,
Isn't there anymore.

I still whisper your name....
Not as often as i used to.
Now it may be once,
Before the day is through.

I still hear your voice....
Replaying in my mind.
But it's fading now,
Soon silence i will find.

I still long for you...
To feel your touch.
But it's not like before,
I don't dream as much.

I still think about you....
And wonder how you are.
But my feelings have changed,
And they don't go as far.

I still feel you sometimes....
Maybe you are thinking of me?
Or maybe it's just a memory,
Of how it used to be.

I still love you....
But it's just not as strong.
Because i'm letting you go now,
So we can both move on.

I still hear you say....
No one will love me like you do.
That's so hard to believe now,
After the hurt you put me through.

You still have a piece of my heart....
Because i always felt you here.
Now, i'm hoping and praying,
That, that too, will quickly disappear.

This will be my last goodbye....
I've nothing else to say.
Everything i felt for you,
Can now just fade away.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Nikita

    That is a very powerful poem and the words touched my heart! very meaningful and many are able to identify with its truthfulness

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: third stanza, third line 'faiding' is supposed to be 'fading.' Just thought that I would let you know :] Also, I noticed that you only capitalized the 'I' at the beginning of the poem. Thought you might want to change that...just thought it was worth mentioning.

    Very good poem with a lot of feeling in it. I really like how you began almost every stanza with 'I still...' - it made the flow go smoother.

    I am sorry for your loss if this is indeed true. We always miss them the most when they are no longer in our lives :(

    Beautiful poem
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Mnisi Lehlogonolo

      Hey thanks a lot for mentioning my mistakes, it's just that i was in a hurry when typing this poem. I wanted someone to see it before a certain time, the poem was written by me and my brother so it' what we both experienced.