Typos: third stanza, third line 'faiding' is supposed to be 'fading.' Just thought that I would let you know :] Also, I noticed that you only capitalized the 'I' at the beginning of the poem. Thought you might want to change that...just thought it was worth mentioning.

Very good poem with a lot of feeling in it. I really like how you began almost every stanza with 'I still...' - it made the flow go smoother.

I am sorry for your loss if this is indeed true. We always miss them the most when they are no longer in our lives :(

Beautiful poem
5/5

That is a very powerful poem and the words touched my heart! very meaningful and many are able to identify with its truthfulness