Absolutely FANTANTIC! .. You did brilliant with this form :D ( I must attempt it! ) Love how you wrote about getting words down on paper .. ( which you have excelled at here! ) You're no clumsy wordsmith :P

Great stuff :)

This is brilliant. You have really mastered this form in this piece, wonderful.

This is an interesting form..one that I should try! You have done an excellent job with this form and did well with the message you wanted to get across too!

I adore this form, and this awesome poet, wrote this form with perfection! He tangled words and webbed my eyes with a delightful poem, that I will read over many times in the future.

I love this rhyme scheme and it made me travel to times when I myself have written this form and I actually felt scrambled and tongue tied afterword's.. ha ha. This poem was a delight to read and deserves to be highlighted! Well Done Steven Beesley