Not My Day!

by Steven Beesley   Jun 19, 2012


It's not your day,
got out the wrong
side of your bed.

Feel like your
head is spinning
around and around.

Sooner or later
your brain will
hit the ground.

Everything is in
a pickle, you seem
to be in a bind.

What to do, just
mind your time and
let yourself unwind.

Today, everything
is like a zoo and
seems twisted.

Maybe should
have stayed in
bed, what to do?

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This is just a rant as things just don't seem to be going in the right direction.

19th June, 2012 (c)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yeah there are days like this and I too wish that I could stay in bed! Rant or no rant you write everything really well :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Love, Love LOVE this! :D.. It soo made me smile.. ( As we've all had one of these days and can relate)

    This the best tonic for one of those days I agree! ~

    "What to do, just
    mind your time and
    let yourself unwind"

    A great write! ( That I enjoyed immensely ) :))

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I think its wonderful when we can rant, its rants like these that allow the block within to flow again and create wonderful poetry... this piece made me giggle, for it really brings to light the frustration of a bad day- :-)

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