This is a great poem. Love the way you write hun ! 5/5 x

I realy like the way it was written 5/5

When I read the title, I was expecting this to be about you cutting yourself and I was going to get depressed because it hurts me to know people actually do cut themselves just to feel a little something... but as I read on, I was impressed with the message. Fantastic job!

Oh so so so true!!!
A great message to get out there and hopefully some will listen.

I must agree with Hannah, I originally thought this would be about you cutting yourself, and I guess in a way it is of similar content but with a much more positive message. Well done!!

Also, a minor typo I think in the second stanza:
'preform' should be 'perform' I think.

5/5

Oh so so so true!!!
A great message to get out there and hopefully some will listen.

I must agree with Hannah, I originally thought this would be about you cutting yourself, and I guess in a way it is of similar content but with a much more positive message. Well done!!

Also, a minor typo I think in the second stanza:
'preform' should be 'perform' I think.

5/5

That was a good advice, and so true. The scar will remain forever and will be there to remind them.

Good write.