Night of Whispers

by Maple Tree   Jun 20, 2012


I have been devoured by the insanity
of your dancing pupils.

Consumed within a destiny
of over powering complexity.

Lay me down upon a meadow
of lemon grass and lavender,

I, the enchanted, weakened by your restlessness,
falls head over heals in love, as the sunset bids adieu....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Stellar sista! Stellar!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is so romantic.
    amazing, as always.
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    The images in this poem are just simply beautiful. I absolutely love the sweetness of this poem as it made me warm inside thinking of you happy and in love.

    Awesome write hun

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very passionate poem, I like the imagery you used to describe the look that he gives you.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    'I, the enchanted, weakened by your restlessness,
    falls head over heals in love'

    Enough romance, Andrea, I'm getting jealous.

    I like how in love you are. Well, I don't know if I will be like you in a short while (the dude is being as shy and hesitated as a newly-wed lass) but I am sure I will feel what you are saying here.

    ;)

    Pssst, how is James? Is he still challenging you?

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