No Longer

by Sunshine & Naughtymouse   Jun 20, 2012


A love, lost once again
my heart will be locked away,
no longer tempted by sweet smiles
no longer tempted by a hair's sway...

I will break the last vow I've made
as I press my lips to this glass of wine,
hours will pass, and I shall forget it's taste,
no longer strong as the first sip, no longer mine.

Shot down and locked up,
your memories, I-no longer need,
alone at the unleashed gate of us,
I set your soul free unaware how I bleed,

Sunk deep like a watery grave,
cold, as you were to me.
half alive, I'll survive, for I know our season,
was meant to pass over, was not meant to be.

by: Rania Moallem and Ben Bean

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    Lmao, about time you forgot the past and this ex. You should of ran a mile when he didn't care to love you anymore. Sometimes Hun we are blind for so long, more so you miss, cos its taken you this long to get over someone who realised a long time ago that he didn't love you nor wanna be with you anymore. Amazing poem from the both of you, now your feelings are your own again lmao

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Awesome work guys...just brilliant

    Great flow and smooth rhyming...it really is a great piece.

    xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    PHEW!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Nana, don't you dare mean this for real. Stick to the 'In Short'.

    This is simple. Simply simple. So what? Seriously...so what? I love it. I love simple. But it's sad. Ok.

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Hahah this is about an old lost love sweety,,,dont worry i wouldnt lose this one :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh this is such an awesome poem, a wonderful collab guys!

    The first stanza - I love the image of sweet smiles and hair swaying in the wind. It reminds me of the slow motion part in a film which shows people's hairs flowing and the smiles as wide as anything! Kind of like Charlie's Angel's movies. Awesome image.

    The second stanza blew me away. The idea that you are forgetting the taste of the wine, it makes me think that this person has drunk so much that the taste of it has gone away. I love the connection between that and the fact that you say your lover is no longer yours. Brilliant.

    I love the rhyming, not forced and flows so well.

    I think that you both have done awesomely writing this poem together.

    LOVED IT

    x

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