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By: Meme
And: The Poetess
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What a mixture! ;P

Yes, This is AMAZING....

It is seriously just sooo smooth and I cannot find anything I'd change, nothing that doesn't fit...

I love the simple title, it gives a false sense of what the poem is...for the title doesn't do the piece justice, as that it is so damn good...Love that.

Reveries always found me
there at the edge of every
moonrise.

^^^I love this part...I guess it is Noura's words for it reminds me of her...but the whole piece is so damn fabulous

Great work girls
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Awesome collab guys!!!

I like the repetition of this piece as it plays a part in expressing what you are trying to convey. There's a touch of sadness here because I can feel that you are talking about death as well as life.

Seriously loved it!

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