Right From The Start

by Amber   Jun 21, 2012


You're the sun in my sky,
The light in my eyes.
You swept me away,
On the very first day.
It's you that I want,
Not some rude little punk.
I yearn for your touch,
Though I know it's not much.
This feeling I get when you are around,
Knocks my feet clean,
Off of the ground.
I want something real,
Not some short little thrill.
Your hands held my heart,
Right from the start.

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  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I absolutely loved this. I liked how u described love here, how it knocks your feet clean off the ground and how you said "your hands held my heart right from the start. Also, I like how u described you wanted something substantial and not short lived feeling of love but deep love. Very relatable and nice write. :)

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