Really great poem:)
Love it:)

This is a really sad poem, Hassan. If this is true, I am sorry for the pain you have endured.

'Years healing the time on warmth remembrance
Over and over again, neglecting and forgetting
Underneath inside my heart something snatching'

^ This has to be my favorite part, because of the last line :) Something inside your heart is snatching...very descriptive words.

Thank you for the comment on my poem.

Excellent
5/5

Sad love tales always take a toll on one. Leaving you dismayed and changing your outlook on love in general. Not all love unions stay in ones favour, but been with that exceptionally blesseth partner, hence letting go; is the most hardest memory to live with. We all love, to be loved and given that high rank chamber in the heart. Heartbreak, i won't wish that upon any but it makes one a better person. One tends to make the right choices and knows what it is to end a love so sublime with a dear one. On the other side of the lane, it leaves you yearning for long. Thus, completely giving one a negative notion regards the four letter intricate but deep word. I loved this. Aapka poem bohot hai! :-)