Comments : Chinese Zodiac Rivalry

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Often people don't realize how much damage
    their mouth can do by nothing thinking
    what they are saying. Depression can
    certainly make you feel numb dealing with
    all the pain and suffer, eyes are swollen
    from nothing but crying.
    well written, enjoyed reading
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I sometimes sit and wonder,
    If you even hear the things you speak from your lips,

    I really like those lines and i love the idea of this poem as well, and I agree, some people dont realize how much hurt they cause by their words... especially if this person meant something to you. . . thats why i like those lines, your ending question has always been a hard question to find an answer to. . . so i like the ending to this poem, nice work on this :)