I really, really like this. However, I thought that it would be more suitable in the dark section, but that is just me.

When I first began reading this, I thought it would be about, well you know, the inner demons. Just the inner demons, so I did not expect that type of twist to occur. You went from telling about those demons, to actually twisting it around and defeating them in a way, or for the time being.

'The demons begin to fade,
Their Arts broken,
By a man made whole,
And the monster he holds within'

^ This part confuses me. If I understand this correctly, you defeated those inner demons by thinking about a monster? I expected a more uplifting reason for defeat. Just another twist for me, I guess :)

Anyway, I just thought that this is an interesting poem, so naturally, I had to comment.

:)

Nice job. Great poem

Awesome ;)

Awwww this is so cute, i really love the way it ends, it's so creative, i looooove it lol